Some people think sport is important to society. Other, however, feel it is nothing more than leisure activity.
Discuss both views and give opinion.
Yes, Sports play a crucial role in the society. But, today the topic asserts that, is sports important for the people or is it a leisure activity. Through this essay, I will going to examine both points of view and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there are group of people who says that games is important for everyone but why? There are number of answers related to this topic. First and foremost is they can get the national platform and bright their future. moreover, they can earn the good salary package and survive in the society easily and government also provide them government jobs as well as every facilities like as free treatment and huge discounts on every product and so on. Apart from that, sports person always keep their body fit and fine and protect their body from the diseases. For example obesity and heart attack. Besides, young people can create their interest easily in games because everyone haven't expert in study and parents encourage their children to rising towards the sports and become a successful person in their carrier.
On other side, some people believe that it is leisure activity. Definitely, it have been also counted in leisure activity. Because today the people have hectic lifestyle and they mostly do this activity in their vacations for relaxation of mind and recharge ourselves. However, everyone haven't potential to become a proffesional in games. In addition to this, parents force their children only focused on their study.As a result, sport naturally becomes families leisure activity in order to spend more time with the family members.
In conclusion, although some people feel leisure activity are the same as sport, I still think that sport play an important role to society because it has brought advantages to local people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97682119205 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34859732392 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7327594859 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252306766938 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834759895775 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873975213629 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178942589547 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806562032182 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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