Environmental degradation is a major world problem. What causes this problem, and what we can do to prevent it?
It is certainly true that degradation of the environment is a significant issue for whole the world. In this essay, I introduce some focal reasons behind this phenomenon and propose some recommendations for solving it.
Environmental degradation may be caused by a variety of factors. First, cars and factories produce too many fatal emissions. Not only do exhausted fumes perish the environment but also they are poisonous for human's lungs. Second, day by day deforesting is developing that it has some various reasons. One factor might be caused by a human mistake such as igniting the fire in the jungle that was happened in California in 2018. Alternatively, logging the trees for commercial purposes is a remarkable factor for deforestation. Furthermore, in green areas trees are cut down in order of usage that land for the playground, buildings, and so on. Last, water contamination that may cause by ships, factories, and human seriously jeopardize the aquatic creatures' habitat.
There are some solutions to prevent the environment from degenerating. The best way to solve this problem would be refusing of contaminating the environment. Decontaminating of air, water, and land require a huge budget, time, and energy also it is noteworthy to say that sometimes it is impossible to do that. In addition, households should separate waste in different garbage bins in order that metals, foods, and plastics be in divided segments for recycling.
On the whole, environmental degradation is a universal problem that has caused by the functions. If we all consider the solutions and practically do them, we can prevent it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 750, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'creatures'' or 'creature's'?
Suggestion: creatures'; creature's
... human seriously jeopardize the aquatic creatures habitat. There are some solutions to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, in addition, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27586206897 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19189053332 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6360272109 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226570399779 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073003533339 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864644976041 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164247093258 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122238079012 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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