Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that only office bearers have the power to tackle environmental issues that have imposed serious threat to our world. However, i think that both government and individuals put in charge of protecting environment.
To commence with, one evident explanation why office holders play crucial role is somewhat related to funds and sources. It is indispensable to understand that handling this matter on large scale requires fortune to invest in technology devices, adept personnel and experienced scientists who take many years to seek major causes and effective solutions. In addition, authorities should introduce several environmental policies and regislations such as curbing carbon dioxide or banning clearance forests and so on. As a matter of fact, politicians have adequate money and power to address serious problems, violent storms, prolonged droughts, melting the polar ice caps and other extreme weather conditions.
Besides that, individuals also make essential contributions to preserve our environment. An underlying factor to take under advisement is activities on the daily life. In other words, citizens can help in various ways by recycling, planting more trees in the garden, utilizing energy efficient household items and so forth. Moreover, obeying the environmental laws is substantial to avert the climate change. For example, in case farmers chop down trees to make way for farming or other their own purposes, regardless of the government’s regulations, this gobal issue will never be successfully mitigated. Hence, it is necessary to have the the efforts and cooperations between office bearers and dwellers.
In conclusion, i opine that two aforementioned elements are significant to protect our enviroment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68441064639 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10110021847 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703422053232 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3398961742 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102327772318 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375895296486 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514765192769 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629342043956 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370180018372 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.