Many people believe that green protection is the obligation of politicians, not personals as personals can do very small. In my view, I wholly disagree with this idea because of three main reasons that I will explain in this essay.
Firstly, I would disagree that only governments have a duty to protect environmentally. For example, governments promulgated a lot of laws about forest protection or other environmental issues. As a result, governments cannot address all illegal deforestation for a long time until now.
Secondly, I believe that protecting the earth is the responsibility of both governments and people. For instance, governments can deal with large problems such a preventing prolonged drought or violent storms, while people can help in many ways such as growing plants or operating environmental protection projects. Consequently, these countries can solve a large part of green problems.
Finally, I also think that people are the main factor to help the environment which can become better. A good example of this is that misguided awareness could lead to environmental pollution, so if personals can improve their knowledge about the environment, they will probably help lots of stuff for governments. Therefore, these problems can address as quickly as possible owing to people would do voluntarily clean small areas and do propaganda some green protection strategies or help improve other's awareness.
For the reasons mentioned above, I totally reject that only governments have the power to solve environmental problems that are posing serious threats in today’s world, and individuals also have the duty to protect their earth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46511627907 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12578095524 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3973994672 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221269242117 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764987432739 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472166565032 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114412394655 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267560714099 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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