Essay topics: Essay topics: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Give reasons for

Essay topics:

Essay topics: Essay topics: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Languages are considered as preservation of human history. Every language has different abilities, which are used to ease communication between people. Thus, any attempt to prevent the extinction of a language helps to keep up a portion of our heritage can be valuable.

Albeit many languages have already vanished, some languages managed to endure. Especially those, which are still being used in religious entities such as Latin and Coptic. As long as the language is being used, people tend to learn it, even if it is difficult to understand. Because they need it to achieve their particular goals. Furthermore, most used languages, such as English itself, has lost a significant portion of its vocabulary. As English language users generally seek to utilize the easiest techniques, as soon as they have been through a situation and faced difficulty in expressing it. They would rather invent new idioms, than maintain tough expressions. Hence, exact vocabulary number is too little to be compared to what is in the dictionary.

Additionally, some languages still sustain itself, even if it has no known alphabet. For instance, the Bedouin language in North Africa had never been written. Nevertheless, it survived until now, where it is widely used by the natives. A potential reason for that is the willingness of people not to change their tongue to another language. It is human nature to support their culture, yet, the world is continuously changing, and languages can be swiftly altered, vanished and born.

Initially, all endangered languages must be listed. Thereafter, programs to save these languages have to be initiated, in order to promote the utilization of such languages to the populace. Finally, a transcription of each one of these languages has to be written and conserved. So, future generations can be always aware of their ancestors’ history.

All in all, languages are the root of communication between people. The current common languages are a mere evolution of more solid languages of old.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... even if it is difficult to understand. Because they need it to achieve their particula...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...t. They would rather invent new idioms, than maintain tough expressions. Hence, exac...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, as to, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27384615385 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00742119573 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6476128421 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7727272727 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203769229559 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624700801746 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364662648254 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121524306902 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132034447328 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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