Every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Essay topics:

Every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Languages are considered as preservation of human history. Every language has different abilities, which are used to ease communication between people. Thus, any attempt to prevent the extinction of a language helps to maintain a portion of our heritage can be valuable.

Albeit many languages have already vanished, some languages managed to endure. Especially those, which are still being used in religious entities such as Latin and Coptic. The main reason for a language to be annihilated is the scarce of its employment as a formal language. For example, most of the old American languages disappeared, because there is nobody currently neither use it nor teach it to the succeeding generations. Furthermore, most used languages, such as English itself, has lost a significant portion of its vocabulary. As English language’s users generally seek to utilize the easiest techniques to express what is in their minds. As a result, exact vocabulary number is too little to be compared to what is in the dictionary.

Additionally, some languages still sustain itself, even if it has no known alphabet. For instance, the Bedouin language in North Africa never had been written. Nevertheless, it survived until now and it is widely used by the natives. A potential reason for that is the willingness of people not to change their tongue to another language. It is human nature to maintain their culture, yet, the world is continuously changing and languages can be swiftly altered, vanished and born.

Initially, all endangered languages must be listed. Thereafter, programs to save these languages have to be initiated, in order to promote the utilization of such languages to the populace. Finally, a transcription of each one of these languages has to be written and conserved. So, future generations can be always aware of their ancestors’ history.

All in all, languages are the root of communication between people. The current common languages are a mere evolution of more solid languages of old.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'had' and 'been'.
Suggestion: had never been
...e, the Bedouin language in North Africa never had been written. Nevertheless, it survived unti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2950310559 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11407691303 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562111801242 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3914368026 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1904761905 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227147492204 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736483176795 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388374676776 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137952223999 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013859925403 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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