Every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Essay topics:

Every year several languages die out. some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Languages are considered as preservation of human history. Every language has different abilities, which are used to ease communication between people. Thus, any attempt to prevent the extinction of a language helps to maintain a portion of our heritage.

Albeit many languages have already vanished, some languages managed to endure. Especially those, which are still being used in religious entities such as Latin and Coptic. The main reason for a language to be annihilated is the scarce of its employment as a formal language. For example, most of the old American languages disappeared, because there is nobody currently neither use it nor teach it to the succeeding generations. Furthermore, most used languages, such as English itself, has lost a significant portion of its vocabulary. As languages’ users generally seek to utilize the easiest ways to express what is in their minds.

Additionally, some languages still sustain itself, even if it has no known alphabet. For instance, the Bedouin language in North Africa never had been written. Nevertheless, it survived until now and it is widely used by the natives.

Initially, all endangered languages must be listed. Thereafter, programs to save these languages have to be initiated, in order to promote the utilization of such languages to the populace. Finally, a transcription of each one of these languages has to be written and conserved. So, future generations can be always aware of their ancestors’ history.

All in all, languages are the root of communication between people. The current common languages are a mere evolution of more solid languages of old.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'had' and 'been'.
Suggestion: had never been
...e, the Bedouin language in North Africa never had been written. Nevertheless, it survived unti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, as to, for example, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37065637066 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15840971767 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7054874696 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2777777778 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214207456385 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747026601363 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403163462396 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127182454267 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226960131724 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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