some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Currently, most of our world’s countries adopt Capitalism fiscal ideology. This means that governments have handed over some responsibilities to firms and companies. So, corporations are not only required to operate within the law, but also are responsible for related communities and environments, where they work inside its sphere and directly influenced with any slight changes, that occur to these factors.
Societies consist of people, venues and infrastructure. These are assets of any corporation, which is willing to achieve greater profit. Thus, communities are assets of corporations, that need continuous development in order to support corporations to expand and increase its revenues.
For instance, an enterprise that have thousands of employees can be promptly affected with the status of either its employees or the environment that surrounds them. As long as the employees are performing well, the company will have better overall results and vice versa. Considering employees as an asset is a deciding factor to the success of any entity. These employees are humans, so they live in communities, that have effects on their performance at work.
It is obvious, that any company aims at maximizing its income as much as possible, despite any obstacle it faces, it must maintain its success and revenues. Nevertheless, general community development programs may not have a positive impact on its employees, even it can worsen their situation and backfires on the firm itself.
A healthy environment, satisfying communities’ needs and developing infrastructure ensures the well-being of corporations themselves. Because these factors determine the performance of employees in any firm, companies shall consider only the needs of their capitals and the prospects of its development through improving societies and environment,
A careful study of the needs of employees must be researched before taking any action. For example, a lack of transports that make them suffer everyday reaching their destinations, poor infrastructure such as roads which delay delivery of the companies’ product or even a spread rumors or stereotypes that might in any way affect the company’s policy of retaining its success. Another instance is a company that sells food and beverages in a community that follows old school’s traditions in nutrition, promoting campaigns for healthy food, that the company produces, can be decisive to its sales.
It is more like win-win deal in favor of both parties, not only communities are developing but also corporations benefit from such processes.
All in all, companies should not under any circumstances pursue any other goal than increasing its revenues and gaining as much profit as possible, even though they must invest in their employees by enhancing the communities, where they live, including environment, because they are considered as their capital.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2502.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63513513514 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20941678492 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0676604311 60.3974514979 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182094416501 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579751698266 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498501635135 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854001955697 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558777556235 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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