Even though globalization affects the world in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
The world is changing rapidly every day that people sometimes find it hard to catch up with new trends of the time and globalization is no an exception. Although it is believed to be an indispensable step of the humans' civilization, there are some downsides of the story that need to be taken into consideration.
First and foremost, allowing free trades among countries, especially between developed and developing groups may surely come up with new challenges. Some people in wealthy countries would oppose using their national resources and budget to help support other regions and not focusing mainly on their own problems from within. For instance, Finland is now facing with the fact that the majority of its citizens requires applying taxes onto immigrants and foreigners who are willing to work and study in their cities. This could affect many groups of people, particularly international students as they now begin to pay extra fee for colleges while Finnish are benefiting from tuition-free policies of their states.
However, the advantages still seem to outweigh the disadvantages since cooperation and information transmission are now faster and easier than ever before in the history. Formation of alliances among nations is now becoming more popular, say the Association of ASEAN or the NATO. This kind of action enables member countries to receive sufficient supports from their organizations while attempting to solve domestic issues in regions. On the other hand, exchanging experiences is now hardly an obstacle as countries with similar cultures can achieve higher improvements thanks to international programs that allow people come to partner countries for studying and working. Young people are having better opportunities to travel overseas and absorb knowledge than their parents' generation was.
All in all, despite globalization comes with a lot of unexpected challenges and potential risks, it is observed to be a ustoppable trend in this century and the returns are highly justifiable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...trends of the time and globalization is no an exception. Although it is believed t...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...eved to be an indispensable step of the humans civilization, there are some downsides ...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d potential risks, it is observed to be a ustoppable trend in this century and th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, while, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40952380952 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96913831152 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653968253968 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.667801136 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0577769760543 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02034356484 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266159518902 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440200593408 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034601741228 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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