Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty in developing countries? What can we do to help the poor? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Poverty has become one of the most substantial sections of human beings in the comtemporary world. It is overwhelmingly located in developing countries, which makes them harder to be solved. This essay will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.
One of the primary causes of the problem is the colonial history of developing countries. It is widely accepted that many of the poorest countries in the world were former colonies, slave-exporting areas and territories from which natural resources were extracted for the benefits of colonizing countries. Such overwhelming extraction bred irreparable damage to both natural and human resources in the economic development of those countries. In addition, colonizers deprived many people of accessing land, education, healthcare, and other resources that allow people to support themselves adequately. The social and economic backwardness was undoubtedly the trigger for poverty from the past until now. The solution is for the government to make more policies on boosting economy to narrow the wealth gulf between their country and the richer ones.
Another factor is war and political instability. Take Syria for example. Over the last decade, the civil war has turned Syria from an affluent region into one of the poorest country in the world. The infrustructure has been all devastated; therefore, no amount of education, talent or technological know-how will allow people to work and reap the benefits of their fruits of labour. Lack of basic need for subsistence and beyond that, economic prosperity and growth, leads the poverty covers the region…A way of solving this is for the government to try their best to come to a coalition among different parties or political groups, so that they can keep the political equilibrium, and they may ask United Nations for advice and help with money and arms.
A third cause of the problem is the vulnarability to the natural disasters. Two third of developing countries focuses on agriculture, which are susceptible to environment. An occasional catastrophic natural disaster can pose a significant obstacle for farmers to earn the livings and eradicate poverty. The effects of flooding in Bangladesh, the drought in the horn of Africa and the earthquake hit Haiti in 2005 are all examples of the way that vulnerability to natural calamities can prove to be devastating to large portions of affected countries. Many impoverished people became refugees within their countries, and almost depended on provision of others for survival. The way forward could be to boost industry and service development instead of relying too much on agriculture and always in the state of ready to confront with catastrophes. This could alleviate the affect of natural disaster on life of citizens.
To sum up, poverty has become an extremely serious issue of human beings, especially in developing countries. This is due, by and large, to the colonization in the past, war and political instability, affect of natural disasters. Failure to tackle this now will lead to its escalating out of control. I am of the view that the main responsibilities for solving this problem lies with the goverments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...th, leads the poverty covers the region…A way of solving this is for the governme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, therefore, third, for example, in addition, by and large, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 41.998997996 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2697.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 510.0 315.596192385 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28823529412 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02517248913 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535294117647 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 849.6 506.74238477 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7841112115 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.88 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187808769866 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046495365116 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361616902267 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10142251556 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286597796965 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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