Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free healthcare?
Every person has a right to use free health care services which are provided by the government. Taking care of people is one of the most vital responsibilities of the management. However, the are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why providing free healthcare is so useful and some of the drawbacks of unpaid medical management.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages of free health protection. One of the main positives of it is that it gives a chance poor people to take care of their health. What I mean by this is that medical treatment is quite expensive in private hospitals and there are some people who do not have enough money to pay for it. In this case, they must use their privilege which was given to them by the government.
Secondly, if they get out of proper medical treatment, it can cause huge problems for whole nation. In other words, epidemics are often spread among the destitute population, and then effect the whole country. If those poor citizens do not use their free health care services, it can increase a risk of getting epidemic among population.
Turning to the another side of argument, a lack of equipment and quality is the main problem. Many people who are provided by public health services suffer from unqualified doctors and outdated equipments. For example, they have to wait for a long and this is detrimental for patients who need emergency medical attention.
In conclusion, it seems that the benefits of free health care are more significant than the drawbacks. Personally, I believe that if the few negatives are solved by the government, it can be considered more useful service for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i mean, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78983050847 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70147586463 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545762711864 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5959438925 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265586898536 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827620886036 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768123132763 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140391310238 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497432067247 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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