Every year several languages die out, some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that many languages spoken by minority groups of people have been disappeared recently. This can be seen by some as an opportunity to simplify our life since more languages available means that more effort is needed to understand and interpret them. However, I completely disagree with this idea because the language has a crucial role to play in cultural and traditional preservation.
There are some reasons why a decrease in the number of languages existing will help to make human life less complicated. As international integration and co-operation are facilitated in an effort to improve economic developments, understanding and communication capacity is required to efficiently process any business deals or peace-seeking negotiation. People thereby have to learn one or even two more foreign languages so as to compete with others in labor markets. Moreover, the fact that technological and medical equipment are largely imported in most countries causes difficulties for practitioners and engineers to operate them in relation to their safety and efficiency. As a result, more time and efforts have to be put just into taking control of such equipment.
On the other hand, language is a central part of a nation’s or minority’s heritage and is seen as a foundation for the developing and upholding any other forms of cultural and social identity. Without the ability to speak and understand their mother tongues, for example, younger generations can neither acknowledge their own ancestors’ history events and milestones nor make a comprehensive interpretation of antique artworks, both of which are important and effective forms of conveying cultural and social values to the next generations. Therefore, they cannot afford a sense of their identity and will lose track of their own history.
In conclusion, people cannot make economic progress at the expense of losing their identity. Language preservation should be seen as a top priority of ones seeking to lead a fulfilling and meaningful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41509433962 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2474701323 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2449889232 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.461538462 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189221546413 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691232054459 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514233954578 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121202897828 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550156752461 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.