Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people choose to become a vegetarian since a vegetarian diet is believed to be better for the human body. Although I agree that eating only plant based foods provides us with a healthier diet, I still don’t agree that we should all be vegetarians.
Vegetarian foods have been known to protect the body from different diseases like cancer, chronic fatigue, cholesterol problems and diabetes. These foods are low in the amount of the unsaturated fats and are therefore, very healthy to eat.
There are many researches saying that humans are able to live healthily by only eating plant-based diets and that meat is not needed for our bodies. Our body requires 4 main nutrients including carbohydrates, protein, fat, vitamins and minerals for having good health. These nutrients can all come from vegetables, fruits, nuts, seeds and whole grains.
However, I don’t believe vegetarianism should apply to everyone. First, if we eat morderate meat servings, we will still have good health. Research from Doctor Hiromi Shinya states that it is good for your health to eat meals that contain 10-15% meat and the remaining from plants. Furthermore, meat is tasty and we can make a lot of delicous meals from meat. Even most traditional foods contain meat and wherever you go, you can enjoy the number of special dishes without thinking if it contains meat or not.
In conclustion, while I agee that becoming vegetarian can help people have good health, I strongly believe it is not an option that everyone should take.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07114624506 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64349764541 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3257366258 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260995180322 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881367267704 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437283481642 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138479570795 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394782735972 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.