THE EXTENDED FAMILY IS LESS IMPORTANT NOW THAN WAS IN THE PAST. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
According to the survey of the last few decades of joint families are drastically decreasing and living independently. At the past, they were living together and had given equal importance to every equally, but it has changed nowadays. I completely agree with the argument and give a supporting illustration.
To start with, in this modern era, people are changed a lot, due to their task plans and long terms goals. In detail, in the present-day world, people are more concern about their achievements and their career targets. Although, they are leading their lives comfortably yet their not at all specific value power to their parents and loved once. Due to this, they may feel depressed and pressure in their work. For example, a person had got a job in another state and it far away from home. He needs to move there and run his job successful, by leaving their kin. This is the main cases of present days.
secondly, they notice uncomfortable in living together, especially for the children's education, due to this they move on and respect to themselves will cut. In other words, if they move on the families get the problem and they may equal each other in everything. Also, it may affect the children studies in this situation. By these reasons the joint families are splitting into personal.
To sum up, as we have seen that people mindset and behaviour changing as per the circumstances, people are preferring nuclear family to extended. The major reasons are long-term goals and problems occurring in their families. In future, people may recognize the advantages of extended families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in other words, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99628252788 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70457274389 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7531569419 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0588235294 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0641538318892 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022268006177 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284252737818 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495803080129 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407884669683 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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