‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Every human being pass through challenging stages in life. The setting off goals is a major trend among people. It is said that desire has more privilege in order to maintain success. In this essay ,an attempt will be made to investigate this statement by using appropriate examples.
In modern society a fashionability of self-development books lead to established model of achievement. Therefore ,reading so called guide books about advanced life individuals tend to follow and believe its advises. Moreover ,authors of this kind of books are mainly rich and famous people who share with their experience and provide step by step actions to successful life. Many of them strongly insist that desire is the best motivator in regard to setting aims. For example, a book “Poor dad, Rich dad” by Robert Kiosaky shows that by thinking positively and following your dreams you certainly can reach any peak in this world.
However, there are many pitfalls in the philosophy of prosperity. Even though wish plays significant role in this case, nevertheless it does not seem unreasonable to suggest that during evaluation of this situation many factors should be counted. Firstly, life circumstances in which are people ,physical state ,level of education even society in which they live. For instance, research of Cambridge University demonstrates that individuals are unhappy because they were too naïve and overestimated their abilities so were vulnerable to failure.
In the way of conclusion ,taking into account all abovementioned facts I would say everything depends on individual .The great figures of history have tried many actions over and over again and there were lots of experiment that were not fortunate. But the main key is not only desire ,its just the first step towards satisfied life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, even so, for example, for instance, kind of, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28719723183 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86764588454 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678200692042 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4658653788 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128277607803 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338411809164 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049329780181 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646068455318 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519477615214 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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