Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Essay topics:

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that it is not necessary for families to support public schools through taxes if their children study in private education system. Personally, I completely disagree with the view.
There are various reasons why it would be wrong to reduce taxes for parents of children who attend private schools. First of all, all citizens are under an obligation to pay taxes for public services, even if some of them do not use these services. The result of paying taxes is aiming to make a contribution to build a more productive and prosperous nation, which is beneficial for all members of the society. For example, government will ultilize the amount from taxes in order to invest in improving buildings, facilities, roads or educational equipments for the sake of enhancing citizens' lifestyle. Therefore, assisting state education system through taxes is compatible with fulfilling an obligation to their country.
In my opinion, we should all be happy to share a part of our income to make public education system become more superior such as decreasing tuition for these schools. In fact that almost students enrolling in public schools are attributable to low tuition, which helps them to pursue their further education dream. Not only does this support give these students flavorable condition to fulfill their study ambition but it also enables them become beneficial and qualified citizens for society. In additon, our share of the money to aid public schools are capable of forming a high-quality education system with equal opportunities with all young peole.
In conclusion, paying taxes to support state education system plays an important role for all people in the long-term benefits, and I do not believe that it is vital to reduce taxes for people who choose private schools.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17808219178 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71774573227 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537671232877 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6289829593 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306590119864 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122259208139 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707604207921 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217519225799 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556859753871 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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