Figures show that some countries have an ever increasing proportion of the population who
are aged 15 or younger. What do you think the current and future effects of this may be for
those countries?
In recent decades, some nations have witnessed a rise in the young population proportion, raising many questions of social stability and long-term growth. Although its current undesirable impacts sound legitimate, the future effects could be equally negative and positive.
It should be acknowledged that this pattern could culminate in many current devastating consequences. First, young population is invariably associated with the higher degree of capital investments in the construction of public facilities for young citizens especially educational institutions, thereby reducing the disbursements on other public sectors such as healthcare and social welfare. Second, a rise in young population also suggests an increase in the percentage of juvenile delinquency. In fact, Due to not integrating into the formal schooling, many young individuals below 15 in Vietnam have a penchant for becoming pickpockets or pilfers for life maintenance, breeding the future offenders for even more serious felonies.
Nonetheless, this rising spectrum in young population would lead to both positive and negative impacts in the future. On the one hand, this upward trend correlates with the larger workforce in the future. This means that more young people would seek for an occupation for tax payment, contributing to the prosperity and stability of the national economy.On the other hand, the young population would pressurize the official authorities to generate employment opportunities. Otherwise, the likelihood of rising unemployment proportions would be inevitable, decimating the national economy.
In conclusion, an increasing percentage of the young population could be overwhelmingly fraught with many pitfalls in both current and future measures regardless of an upside of a bigger workforce. Official authorities could undertake some initiatives controlling the fertility rate to balance the population for the long-term growth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, second, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97132616487 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21525554483 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2277947644 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172159228731 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714623196035 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376912109124 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117702715679 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269784957969 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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