Essay topics:
forest destruction
Today, we'll tell you about an extremely urgent matter at present to human nature! It is the destruction of forests. The main reason is because people want to cut down trees for timber house construction or cultivation, animal husbandry. But everyone knows that what is natural is not infinite. Here are some pictures of the destruction of forests due to human-caused. The destruction of forests so will cause serious consequences such as floods, droughts, lost a "perimeter protection" from the tsunami.Therefore, we need to have people more aware of the protection and use of natural resources sensibly. Because nature is a "green lungs" of the Earth! Let's cherish and appreciate it
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 465, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...equences such as floods, droughts, lost a 'perimeter protection' from t...
^
Line 1, column 517, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...meter protection' from the tsunami.Therefore, we need to have people more aware of t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 638, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... resources sensibly. Because nature is a 'green lungs' of the Earth! ...
^
Line 1, column 679, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... 'green lungs' of the Earth! Lets cherish and appreciate it
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 593.0 1615.20841683 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 111.0 315.596192385 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34234234234 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.24586718041 4.20363070211 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47058552449 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 176.041082164 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.747747747748 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 187.2 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.036727473 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233986818252 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111020380517 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137711981641 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233986818252 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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