In the future of all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages ?
In the far future, a lot of different types of public transports will be turned into automation, so that will dramatically decrease the number of drivers. Personally, I believe that this development has both positive and negative aspects because of the following reasons.
On the one hand, there are two possible reasons why this trend will benefit most customers. It is true that nowadays, the number of addicted and alcoholic users dramatically rises, especially drivers and people who work in transport-related majors. Thus this unacknowledged activities will negatively affect customers, so the shift of automation plays an important role in controlling drivers and keeping safety of passengers. Moreover, this development will directively affect the inside space of public transports. For example, in current days, the number of available seats is substandard because it have to spend spend small space for drivers, so if people endeavour to cut down drivers' position, public transports will have more seats to serve customers.
On the other hand, this trend also develop negatively, and it can be the dangerous factor which will directively cause on people. Firstly, in some case, passengers need to stop their journey because of extremely unwanted situations. For example, because of following ready roads, if passengers want to stop to come back home, it will be impossible. Secondly, the suitable for extremely tortuous road will not be available. For instance, in Vietnam, some attractive mountainous destinations have no internet signal so that using wireless connection seems impossible.
In conclusion, I believe that this development will have both negative and positive aspects. In terms of postive face, the safety and comfortable of customers will increase, yet passengers will not control the journey and some remote are cannot use wireless control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52430555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00452775287 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9401842955 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168984385949 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666272978879 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458332004093 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112235197647 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189345715029 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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