In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is common belief that printed newspapers or books won’t be purchased by
people because of the presence of the Internet. However, I do not subscribe to this
statement that no one will buy traditional newspapers or books as they can access
everything to read online for free.
On the one hand, it is difficult to imagine that people would not purchase
newspapers or books in printed versions anymore in the future. An excessive
number of bookworms adore their reading habits with traditional books. Moreover,
the vast majority of middle-aged and older people relish the texture and character
of actual books, and definitely enjoy reading newspapers and magazines for news
updates. Also, they lack technological know-how to download the E-books and
access to the Internet. For instance, The New York Times still generates sizeable
revenue from subscriptions, and is one of the magazines in the United States
currently publishing a daily. Furthermore, a great number of youngsters prefer
reading paperback and hardcover books to reduce eye strain.
On the other hand, there is no guarantee that everyone might read everything
online in a complimentary way. The issue of copyright is causing an excessive
amount of anxiety among individuals, especially among creators of works. Readers
must be purchased e-books or online documents as the same manner that the
printed copies are. This implies they must pay for them, in doing so, they show
respect to authors. The high incidence of infringement of copyright might be
ascribed to reading or downloading e-books and documents for free. This
expresses readers have little regard for the writers.
To conclude, it is my firm conviction that people want conventional books and
newspapers since they will not be able to read everything online without paying a
fee.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37113402062 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84032623966 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5643361477 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334615819571 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106263210468 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950079796176 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867376895968 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969107450813 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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