In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays. reading books is more and more increasingly focused and people have different ways to take up this hobby. There is a common belief that in the future, people will prefer reading free online to reading printed newspapers or books. I completely agree with this idea because of saving a lot of money and its utilities.
The first reason for this is because people can be sparing a large expense on buying printed books when reading online without paying. In the market, there are lots of books which have high prices and they also come out with a small number. For instance, according to the research of the University of Economics Ho Chi Minh, 80% of the young spend 30% of their income on reading books annually. Especially, the number of books remaining unsold is not small, which leads to a huge waste amount of money.
In addition to the reason above, I also believe that people enjoy reading everything online due to its usefulness. By contrast to the book, with a smartphone, they can read any place they want, any time when they are free. For example, a businessman, who is quite busy with work, can read news on the Internet while they are on trains. Sometimes, the volume of the books is big, it is too inconvenient for the adults to bring it along, while the smartphone is light and always alongside.
To sum up, reading everything online without paying is motivated by saving a large expense and its utilities. For these reasons, it is clear that in the future, people would rather reading online without fee than buy printed newspapers or books.
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...its usefulness. By contrast to the book, with a smartphone, they can read any pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70545454545 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44910103258 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.8007301885 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344969500283 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117665618512 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675518884803 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204965299783 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01012915636 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.