In Many Countries Today People In Cities Either Live Alone Or In Small Family Units Rather Than In Large Extended Family Groups Is This A Positive Or Negative Trend

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In Many Countries Today, People In Cities Either Live Alone Or In Small Family Units, Rather Than In Large, Extended Family Groups. Is This A Positive Or Negative Trend?

Nowadays, society has developed rapidly and many people in cities prefer living individually or in small families to living with their parents and grandparents. I believe this is a positive trend because living alone can help people develop themselves and that results in the positive changes and improvements in the mental health of adults.
First, living alone changes young people to be mature, responsible adults. They can improve many soft skills which can not be practiced while living with large or extended families. According to a survey conducted by the University of Economics Ho Chi Minh City, 80% of the students faced a lot of difficulties when they moved out of their parent's homes. It's due to their dependence on their parents. For instance, a mother can train a child in survival skills such as cooking skills or going groceries, etc and these skills can be developed well just when living alone.
Second, people can develop their unique individuality. Most adults usually just take care of their physical health, not mental health. When living individually, they have a space to relax and look at themselves, their soul. It helps people to know themselves, and have self-assuredness. For instance, many studies of Yale University suggest that people taking care of themselves have good mental health and work more efficiently. This lifestyle is more and more popular, which is favored by the young.
In summary, in my view, there are many more positive elements than negative, as there are clear benefits to individuals living alone or in small family units. So, those living away from large groups can develop survival skills and take care of their mental health.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in summary, such as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69117036978 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3823429711 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7058823529 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2377962109 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833649841658 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818532157471 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173254039501 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985492933333 0.056905535591 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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