In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying .
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the industrialized world, the Internet plays a significant role in that there is a lot of news and books online so everyone likes buying the traditional ones. Personally, I totally agree that printed books and newspapers will be out of date as more and more people are using electric devices everyday which provide many advantages.
First of all, the online devices update every minute so that people can catch up with the trends of the world. If people use the normal ones, they have to wait until tomorrow to publish newspapers, while online news lets them immediately know the news when they occur. E-books and E-news also helps us not to miss the events occurring before that we don’t have free time to read at that time. Moreover, there are some books that are difficult to buy offline or take too much time to order, but using online books is more convenient and saves time.
Secondly, the factories have to use more than 30 tons of papers and thousands of wood per day to publish books and newspapers. They need to cut down the trees that step by step destroy the forest. Furthermore, the emissions of the factories which fedecate to the environment during the process will cause greenhouse effect and serious pollution such as air pollution, water pollution, soil pollution,... However, online books and newspapers do not do the same thing like that. We just need an electric device connected to the Internet and we can read the news that does not affect the environment.
In conclusion, I support E-books and E-news is preferentable to the printed ones because of its advantages. Hopefully, the more morden our life is, the more intelligent we will be.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... more people are using electric devices everyday which provide many advantages. First...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use effect and serious pollution such as air pollution, water pollution, soil pol...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...llution, water pollution, soil pollution,... However, online books and newspapers ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84668989547 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61746928448 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5414536919 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217044316482 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742510154498 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417452904998 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134499021316 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017543914828 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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