In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that in up-coming years, because of improvement in technological devices, there would be no individuals who may be fond of purchasing books and newspapers. Since they would be able to read various topics on the internet without wasting any money. I totally disagree with this opinion based on some reasons which will be clarified later.
To commence with, several reasons have propelled some individuals not to be concurred with disappearing paper base of newspapers and books in the future. The first one has been the unfair distribution of development. Although the world has witnessed a high pace of improving electronic devices, some areas have still had several basic issues. Take, Yemen, as an example, where residents have had deep difficulties which have led them not to be able to afford to buy electronic devices. When people could not be able to buy gadgets, therefore, they could not have ability to read articles and news on the internet. Consequently, they will keep buying newspapers in order to be informed about diverse situations around the world even in their future.
In addition, in spite of not being able to afford electronic devices, there would be several individuals who may have a keen interest in reading paper books. These people may be extremely prosperous, but cannot continue reading with their tablets. This could result in not only having trouble to read because of their eyes, but also not to have a good relation with gadgets. As gadgets may have adverse effects on eyes, some people have more interest in reading with real books in order to decline those circumstances. Moreover, even though technology has played a significant role in people’s lives, some of them may not have a satisfying relationship with it. So, in their spare time they would prefer to read paper base rather than e-books.
In conclusion, based on writer’s opinion there are some specific issues such as earning less amount of money in some societies and being fond of reading books rather than with gadgets. According to those reasons, in near future there would be fewer possibilities that books and newspapers would be completely vanished.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ond of purchasing books and newspapers. Since they would be able to read various topi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0782122905 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71304266104 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516759776536 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7109602491 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.941176471 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251252463256 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922273375974 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544404790991 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174729777243 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461378564785 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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