In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Nowadays, particularly in several societies, individuals prefer buying to renting houses. Some reasons have propelled people to be fond of this situation which will be clarified later. Regarding to all this condition’ aspects, I myself claim that it is a satisfying development rather than negative one.
To commence with, people have considered some issues that have made them to have better opinion about buying houses than renting them. The main one is that with owning their house, there have been no requirements to pay monthly rent. This has resulted in reducing their stress when it comes to first day of month. Moreover, they could be able to save specific amount of money instead of wasting them by paying charges from their earnings. Also, especially in societies which have had bad economic condition, if their citizens do not decide to buy one house, they may not be able to afford buying one in near future. Take, Iran, as an example, where residents have witnessed increasing products’ prices which has led them not to have ability to buy them.
In addition, under this circumstance, not only people, but also authorities have obtained some benefits. For citizens, declining their stress about their ability to pay their rents as well as increasing their confidence and peace that they have owned properties, should not be overlooked. On the other hand, since these types of individuals have had to move to other locations, greater number of houses should be prepared in order to allow them alter their living places easily. Governments, therefore, have had less difficulties to provide new accommodation places for people who do not own houses. Consequently, this should be called as a positive improvement that both sides have gained profits.
In conclusion, by being able to purchase a home, people have been able to melt their tension away as well as having more self-steam about their up-coming years. For those reasons, I do believe it has made conditions much better.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 589, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
...e house, they may not be able to afford buying one in near future. Take, Iran, as an e...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun difficulties is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...asily. Governments, therefore, have had less difficulties to provide new accommodati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11009174312 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68965764478 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4072022408 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217497778005 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844973868528 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572928486885 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158788322041 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752987879713 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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