In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
For several years now, various electronic books and websites presenting articles as well as worldwide news are increasingly predominating in our so-called “hi-tech” world. Therefore, the prospective of printed newspapers or books is being abandoned and replaced by modern alternatives such as e-books or Internet.
It seems to me that despite the great comfort arising from an online book, the printed newspapers or books in fact will not lose their relevance in the near future.
Firstly, numerous people may encounter with the major issue of access to the Internet. No matter how comfortable the online journals of books are, attempt to read or download without any payment will inevitably fail if the person has no Internet speed and the fact of whether the individual is able to pay for Internet charges, even, if the costs are not extremely high, he or she has to have a device such as telephone or laptop, which require another amount of money to spend. A second factor is a significant question of health. This means that even people who have bought special tablets for e-books, which do not produce emissions harmful for eyes, they still use smartphones for a quick read. In fact, individuals tend to read magazines and journals on their phones or computers, and then find their eyesight negatively impaired in many cases, especially when a person is middle e-aged of aid age.
Finally, certainly true to say that the elderly people make up a large proportion of population will buy traditional journals and books, rather than read them online compared to youth. This happens because of the number of reasons, however, perhaps the most obvious argument underlying this trend is primarily older people’s ignorance of using multiple e-books as well as Internet.
Admittedly, there are a lot of positives to online resources such as articles, electronic magazines, journals and books, most notably the convenience of reading online whenever a person wants and without extra payment or expenses. Nevertheless, it appears that electronic newspapers and books cannot completely replace or exclude printed journals and books from use.
To conclude, in our contemporary society predominated by technology, it seems reasonable and obvious for the individuals to read the necessary information online rather than using common and outdated newspapers and books. However, due to the Internet expenses and health concerns a variety of e-books and magazines cannot make the audience totally refuse the published newspapers and books.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, as to, in fact, such as, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32506203474 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82685929899 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573200992556 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1204814594 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.285714286 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7857142857 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239704861402 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751629191319 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459200139716 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120704530665 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028046286814 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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