In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is clear that the sources of press are improving nowadays. As we see, upcoming days nobody will purchase pressed books or magazines because of reading everything can be read from online. I will discuss advantages and disadvantages about it in following essay.
Firstly, populations of the world are suffering from the position of pandemic. As a result, most of jobs altered to online form. On the other hand, lots of useful apps were invented by programmers. There are very useful apps for humans. They are easy- to - use for running. They are very delightful to carry anywhere and any time. Moreover, it takes a long time to deliver from market to home. It is a harsh position for readers.
Secondly, there have lots of disadvantages for people. Consumers do not need to spend money for purchasing magazines and do not wait a long time. Other side of the coin, the phone of screen has an affect to our eyesight during the reading time. Moreover, the advertisements of printed newspapers or books are poor at the moment. In the following days if the feature of ads are increased the printed presses. It wil become natural habit for purchasers.
To sum up, the manufacture of paper books or magazines are decreasing. The government should improve the ads which are enlarging industry of press. It will be a wide range positive way for enhancing the magazines and books.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...improving nowadays. As we see, upcoming days nobody will purchase pressed books or m...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the jobs') or simply say ''most jobs''.
Suggestion: most of the jobs; most jobs
... the position of pandemic. As a result, most of jobs altered to online form. On the other ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82203389831 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73062617765 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601694915254 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1821437197 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.9 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.65 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172296952242 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423061210626 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551602858143 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103056211916 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552446734772 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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