One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
For centuries, humans have been searching ways to live longer and thank to advancement in medical field and it is improving day by day. This improvement had some advantages and a few disadvantages which will be discussed in the following essay.
On the one side, humans want to live more, thus, they apply for healthy food supplements and medicine. The other side of the coin, as we know, nowadays all of the world are writhing from position of pandemic. We need to help from medical care. Hence, the advantages of medicine have further increased as the whole world needs medical care. For example, the government of Uzbekistan built a new health service center and were designated 20% budget for sick people who were suffering from the coronavirus.
Therefore, there is another side. There are a few disadvantages. If ill people call out the medical care but they do not fall in on time and if an error is diagnosed. As a result, the disease may worsen. A big loss of medicine is ambiguous scratch which is written by doctors. There are 7000 dead every year because of doctor's unclear handwriting.
To sum up, taking all of the above into account, although there are clear benefits to the medicine, there are also certain risks. Having said that ,I believe that these can be minimise side of disadvantages. As far as, I am concern to invent a robot which look after for first aid people who are disabled and terribly ill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72690763052 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63739559997 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646586345382 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7812374093 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5625 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192759811746 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504371766595 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621686301755 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105202565034 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639285190867 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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