In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional school. Which would you prefer?
Thanks to the fast pace of the development of highly modern technology, nowadays students can take a full advantage of these devices to study at home. However, it is always argued that it would be much better for students to go to traditional school and be educated by teachers. In my point of view, I strongly believe that students will find studying at home by means of using laptop, television, etc much more beneficial in the future.
At the outset, there is no denying that students can reap a plethora of merits from studying on the internet in terms of knowledge. Initially, online course is indisputably much more optional for students. In other words, they are allowed to choose the best courses which are perfectly commensurate with their ability.
In addition to that, students will be given chances to have exposure to an enormous deal of updated knowledge. It is apparent that the educational system biased on conventional teaching methods along with so much academic studying. As a result it has hindered students from approaching to many requisite practical understanding and skills to face with the challenge of AI and automation. Spending time on studying online is indisputably proven to provide students a better schooling environment with the aim of equipping them many momentous skills and deeper disciplinary knowledge to become a global citizen.
Furthermore, not only is it a productive learning way of students but it also exerts a positive impact on the development of the society. This teaching method affect the national economy in sense that it can enhance the educational outcome and provide a highly qualified workforce for factories, companies, backbone industries to flourish and increase wealth.
To sum up, I totally believe that it is better for students to stay at home and study on the internet in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10855263158 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91247555362 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575657894737 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3539077392 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263570309789 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878204109489 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834828936474 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150933735561 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101781679371 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.