Some people think that we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Taxation has been one of the most controversial issues for many years. It is sometimes claimed that people have the right to keep all of their money and therefore, there is no need for them to pay tax. Nonetheless, I wholeheartedly believe that this statement is awfully wrong-headed.
To commence with, this situation definitely will exert a negative impact on many public services. Initially, national schools and university is likely to be driven to the verge of lacking investment along with endowment from the government. As a result, students certainly have to struggle with the inequality or discrimination as they do not have the same opportunity to study in a good teaching environment. There is no doubt that rich kids are capable of affording a great deal of money with a view to pursing a high level of education, whereas, those who do not have adequate money will find it impossible to pursue their dreams.
Furthermore, another noteworthy point is the health care provision. It is apparent that if people do not have to tax to the state, they will be required to pay an enormous amount of money in case they go to the hospitals to have a monthly general check-up or even have medical treatment. Consequently, in all likelihood there will be a sharp fall in the number of individuals who usually visit the hospitals to make sure they are in good health owing to being unable to pay for these medical services. This will affect the national health due to a lower rate of the life expectancy.
Last but not least, social welfare provided for the unemployed will have to face the risk of suffering from a significant decrease. This status can make the gap between the rich and the poor become bigger and bigger, which is the main cause of many serious demonstrations and rebellions.
To sum up, I am totally against with this idea due to its terrible long lasting effects on the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, whereas, no doubt, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79939209726 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82657122696 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.188920129 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105895138126 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326241598917 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576770345082 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538490507553 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507019281423 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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