With an increasing number of people eating fast food, which if eating too regularly can cause health issues, some people think that the only solution is to ban it completely. To what extent do you agree?
Over the past few years, there has been an overwhelming upsurge in the popularity of fast food, which is the main reason for a lot of health problems among the society. To deal with this issue, it is often suggested that fast food should be prohibited completely. Nonetheless, in my point of view, I totally disagree with this motion.
Initially, there is no denying that fast food has played an integral part in people’s life for a long time. It is apparent fast food is considered as a great choice owing to its expediency in the fast space of this modern world. Employers, employees, spouses or even students who always have to work full time can reap a lot of benefit from fast food when they find it too busy to prepare for a home- cooked meal. Moreover, fast food also provides customers a way of enjoying their meals which is devoid of knives, folks, plates like their other valuable meals. This can make it possible for them to eat far away from home in the most convenient way. Furthermore, fast food restaurants have taken advantage over full – service restaurants on the grounds that it is much lower – priced. In preference to having to pay for other extra services that are offered, people find it affordability when buying products of fast food.
In addition to that, the policy of banning fast food is likely to exert an adverse impact on the development of the fast food industry and also the national economy. The rapid growing system of fast food restaurants all over the world has made a great contribution to the development of the society. For instance, according to Franchise Help, in 2018, globally the industry generates revenue of over 570 billion of dollars which is bigger than the economy value of many countries. Besides, it has brought a lot of job opportunities for people and contributed to diminish the unemployment rate each year. For example, in the USA, the industry employs over 4 million people and counting- restaurants franchise adds over 200,000 jobs in 2015.
To encapsulate, I am totally against this statement due to its negative effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Line 2, column 380, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'busies'?
Suggestion: busies
...it from fast food when they find it too busy to prepare for a home- cooked meal. Mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81717451524 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6942928177 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576177285319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6952681211 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210661974402 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699178458749 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384985849501 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10925159526 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664509197518 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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