The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?
Universe is always a very mysterious thing to human. Although science and technology have highly developed, whether or not there is life on other planets is still a big question. While the government is using lots of funds to discover this, some people opine that instead of wasting money on this project, the government should spend more money addressing the problems of public. Personally, I believe that both discovering life on other planets and solving public matters are significant.
In the first place, space research brings people plentiful benefits in the long run. People can enrich their knowledge and curiosity about other life forms. In addition, by researching planets, scientists are capable of working out key for overpopulation problem. For instance, after discovering Mars as well as its condition, maybe, in the near future, human will settle in this planet and living on Mars might be no longer a science-fiction story. Futhermore, the more people know about the universe, the better they understand themselves. Seeing the harsh weather of other planets which can not allow anybody to live, people will appreciate their lives on the Earth. Therefore, they will together protect the big home.
On the other hand, human are facing many difficult problems on the Earth. Famine, social evils and natural disasters occur eith increasing frequence and need to be tackled thoroughly. That is why people opine that government should spend money addressing these problems first in lieu of paying attention to space research. Moreover, illiteracy is considered as the biggest enemy of people all around the world. Thus, it seems to be very wasteful to invest capital in space projects while people are struggling with illiteracy to improve their qualifications.
To sum up, the government ought to consider what they should do so that both discovering life on planets and tackling problems on the Earth are arranged reasonably.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...e and technology have highly developed, whether or not there is life on other planets is still...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28387096774 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75526928719 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3471401256 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3529411765 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360823479351 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946835603739 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132030807236 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223100070891 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120829929308 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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