The gap between the rich and poor is becoming wider, the rich is becoming richer, and the poor are getting even poor.
What problem can the situation cause?
What can be done to reduce this gap?
Unfortunately, in the 21st century, the distance between affluent and the poor people has become increased at alarming rate. This essay will discuss the problems caused by this phenomenon and suggest some solutions that government and individuals could take to reduce this gap.
In my opinion, there are three main big problems created by this situation. Firstly, when rich people are becoming richer every day, poor people are never able to uplift themselves in the society. Secondly, many poor families cannot have a single meal in a day, which leads to death if it continues for a while. Sometimes people also suffer from the health problems due to lack of food. In Africa, for example, 12 Africans die from hunger every minute, according to The Independent news. Finally, underprivileged students choose to do crime as a last option to earn money, and thus crime ration will escalate in the community.
To reduce this gap, there are some measures that government and an opulent family could take. One solution is government can encourage élite family to take part in charity and spend more time with deprived family. Rich parent should instruct their child to share everything with their poor colleagues. By doing this, gap between rich and poor students can reduce before rich students take that as a negative. The government can also focus more on such programs, which help poor people to earn money and enable them to stand in the society.
In conclusion, there are other problems caused by this situation, however, I believed this are the main and biggest problem creates by this phenomenon. By introducing above measures, the government can shrink the gap between the rich and the poor people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06007067138 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55606270064 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7677652855 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374721755962 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12123425088 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101771106668 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240849784576 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670438129609 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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