Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Genetic engineering issue is the most noticeable nowadays this has been discussed a lot of in media because they believe this way leads to improve their life. However, others would argue that this might endanger human life. This essay will argue that although this technology has numerous benefits if this did not do in carefully research, it will give a negative impact.
Improving the qualities of human life by modifying human DNA is one of the ways to decrease chronic diseases. Some of the scientists with their research believe that they can detect diseases earlier, even before a baby is born by analyzing the gene as soon as possible. As a result, all of the children will be born with a healthy body. Research conducted by Oxford University shows that with genetic engineering 60% of diseases of children before they were born can be detected and also solved. However, because the diseases of them cannot be solved at all, some parents prefer to do abortions, and this will decline the number of the human population.
Most importantly, people also should be concerted in the negative impact of this technology because it offers benefits that will usually come along with risk. In fact, when it comes to testing on the gene, the most important matter, which is even above the possibility, is safety because the main reason for this technology was created to helping people. As a result, the failure of genetic engineering leads to increased mortality. For instance, in China 50% fatality at birth children because of manipulating the gene. Moreover, before doing this way people should consider it well.
In conclusion, although manipulating the gene can decrease the chronic disease, this also leads to new problems such as fatality at birth. If it is possible, some rules about modifying human DNA must be applied.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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... gene as soon as possible. As a result, all of the children will be born with a healthy bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03606557377 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60065524169 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52131147541 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6346447473 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142559845101 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536170006725 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319830377895 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846277696628 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308712951483 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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