A gift can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child develop?
Children are in the situation of learning a lot from their surroundings and everything could have an impact on their character. Indeed, psychologists believe in the fact that having a society with mentally healthy people could not be reached unless they had a good childhood away from any worrying issue. Thus, we have to take into account the point that any gift would affect children's manner especially when they become an adolescent. Most children wish we would give them a toy as a gift, so toys do have an irreplaceable status in children's bringing up. Therefore, a good gift for a child would have the following features.
A toy as a gift needs to encourage the child to do his job without any help and providing him an energetic atmosphere. Lazy children commonly said to overplay video games and do not play with toys needed an active personality. I think my cousin is a good example of this statement whose father (my uncle) is a wise person and used to buy toys like a soccer ball, cars, etc. for his son. My cousin used to spend all his time playing with his toys. He is a go-getter man in his career now and everybody in our family believes that the reason of which is the toy he played with.
A gift could even be a book for a child. Although children interest in books less than toys, most people think they must be familiarized with books from their childhood. Moreover, psychologists say that parents had better read some stories to children. Everybody says that I am a down-to-earth person and could make a precise decision in any situation. I think if I had not read a lot of books before my school career, I would not be such a creative person that I am. Therefore, I might as well try to give some books to children in order to challenge their minds.
In conclusion, not only could gifts for children make them more active, but also would affect their character. Therefore I would buy a kind of gift for a child, regarding his gender, which motivates him to be a creative person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'gift'
Suggestion: gift
...eir minds In conclusion not only could gifts for children make them more active but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42817679558 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52045294903 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488950276243 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 362.0 20.2975951904 1783% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1603.0 106.682146367 1503% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 362.0 20.7667163134 1743% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 94.0 7.06120827912 1331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153668563605 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153668563605 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112485142707 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524188542293 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 180.4 13.0946893788 1378% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -279.03 50.2224549098 -556% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 142.1 11.3001002004 1258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.89 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.99 8.58950901804 279% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 146.8 10.1190380762 1451% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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