Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue?

Essay topics:

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle this issue?

Global warming is a natural condition that is affecting the world more and more each day. The causes of this problem and some suggestions to lower its influence will be analyzed in the following essay.

Two main reasons causing the warming of the earth are identified as greenhouse effect and deforestation. Firstly, the excessive load of greenhouse gas is deemed the root of the phenomenon. Coal burning and other hazardous chemicals utilization are to blame for the concentration of cacbon dioxide in the atmosphere. Also, factories and motor vehicles are contributed to a large amount of CO2 emissions. Secondly, the cutting down of trees for wood and farming is leading to climate change. Photosynthesis, which is a process related to respiration of organism, have been disrupted by the alarming rate of trees cutting down to satisfy human's greed.

Facing with such a serious problem, both governments and individuals should take measures to solve it. The authorities might enforce stricter laws on forest exploitation. This action not only punish those who take advantage of the nature but also help to keep the green of the earth. Besides, individuals are responsible for their actions towards environment and donate money to organisations.

In conclusion, global warming is a major concern that requires governments as well as individuals to involve immediately.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'chemicals'' or 'chemical's'?
Suggestion: chemicals'; chemical's
...menon. Coal burning and other hazardous chemicals utilization are to blame for the concen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35483870968 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06423546062 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3842188704 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3846153846 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206257404922 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594032374496 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726033759821 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129612528409 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611089438552 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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