Globalisation has both advantages and disadvantages.
These days, globalization has received a great deal of public attention. Although this trend is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify these.
On the one hand, globalization have many disadvantages that cannot be ignored. To begin with, globalization can be a scary with developed countries. Since globally connected world allow companies exchange their experiences and techniques, those will be stolen if they don’t control strictly. In fact, many companies of US are stolen their techniques when they joint venture with Chinese companies. In addition, globalization have an impact on foreign trade. For instance, many goods from developing nations import to US usually have lower prices than the local goods, that’s why many companies always work and guard very carefully.
On the other hand, globalization bring several benefits. First, it has helped many developing countries have opportunities to communicate, exchange products and encourage their economies. For example, international businesses can be built in foreign countries, as a result, that can create many jobs for inhabitants and help they acquire the modern technologies around the world, as well as that it can boost the local living standard. Second, globalization is the best opportunity to develop the tourism industry which is bring a great profit and have less influence on environment. This connected allow people to travel around the world and attract visitors to discover the domestic cultures. Last but not least, globalization can connect every people around the world. Few years agO, people in this planet could know Africa had a serious epidemic disease and they need to help, so kindness people around world can be known by internet and connected networks. A great number of food, money were donated, many charity organizations went to there and help the local people have stable life.
In conclusion, globalization is a great opportunity to connect people as well as the economies around the world. Globalization will be more useful and productive if people can improve problems like about confidentialities and rights between business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 524, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...o develop the tourism industry which is bring a great profit and have less influence ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with, as well as that, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51818181818 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.026344384 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6725388028 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0100861059094 0.244688304435 4% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00514988314924 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212335121839 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0157115728887 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02721324251 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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