The Government’s investment in arts, music, and theatre is a waste of money. The Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with the statements?
It is often thought that ministry finance in the public sector instead of spending their budget on arts, opera, and theatre. Although, I disagree on a larger extent with the given statement and my point is discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Art, melody, and theatre play a vital role in every nation so, the administrator should spend cash on these amusement sectors. Moreover, individuals are influenced by their culture and maintain in the upcoming generation. If the ministry should invest funds in art, music, and theatre these sectors are huge benefits for our nation. Because they can help increase our boosting economy and tourism.
Furthermore, Art, music, and theatre are providing great job opportunities hence, this sector is motivational and many skilled workers can earn a livelihood. Besides, many commodities are passion able for their culture and heritage. Therefore, people are moving towards to maintain a culture and get a great job seeking for this recreational field. Like as, music singer, artist, and actor. Besides, if our nation’s culture keeps going that’s they aid to attract tourism activity and boosting our economy. To illustrate, In Gujarat states, Kutch is an attractive place in holiday making and there are 2 million tourists are visited per annum. The reasons are that this place is known about their civilization, traditions and Palaeolithic.
On the contrary, other public services are also important in our society, so that’s why the power should spend payment on human necessities. Such as emergency services, ambulance, fire station. Moreover, the regime should vast wealth to invest in the amusement sector, but they cannot get much profit or taxes. Also, arts, music, and theatre are more require time for maintenance. So, that’s reasons the authority should spend wage on public services rather than recreational sectors
To conclude, in evidently the nation art, music and theatre should be more developed to plummet unemployment allocating more job opportunities all around the world. However, it also helps in our nations to increase the economy, tourism as well as maintain our culture for a long period.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35380116959 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77044430547 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576023391813 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0502968246 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3684210526 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190098292474 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539798943811 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678646387119 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110386531394 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539049785305 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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