Just as good policy is inseparable from the support of science, science needs government funding and advocacy. Some people argued that investment in science benefits the national economy and strength compared to other subjects. Even if this unbalanced investment may lead to gaps in the development of some disciplines, it can fight for more benefits for a country.
A field with a large budget of education could be used to push for better pay, benefits and job security not only for scientists but also for teachers in this field. With satisfying treatment and sufficient salary, researchers in science will increase at an precedented pace. This lead to a dramatically development for science in application , military, biology and medicine , which can affect a country's level positively in global, nowadays, especially everyone can not leave technology.
Through government funding, equipment upgrades and optimization of the laboratory environment, more opportunities are provided to stimulate children's interests which are rarely in society. A better environment and knowledge keeps up with times can tap into children's potential for science. For example, there are lots of experisements on science books, such as the emission of electrons onto a blackboard, illustrating that rays have two properties. it's hard for parents to buy a launcher for their child to prove some theory like this, but schools can do just that. In this way, talents major in science, growthing in this country, will increase continuously to lead a strengthful country.
Like every coin has two sides, unbalanced investment may affect other subject adversely such as literary and art. A society, without human research and atmosphere of art, is unhealth. Therefore government should not ignore the contribution from other subjects.
To sum up, in my opinion, the positive impact of investing more money in teaching science far outweigh its problems.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02019611609 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0278260693 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249896773361 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775732900526 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494552828459 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141051896452 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342034446509 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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