Governments should support care vs finance for retired people. While they should save money when they get older. Discuss both views and give opinions?
People's opinion whether individuals in retirement should have care and financial aid or be self-supported by their own saving money. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why I am more inclined towards the former.
On one hand, senior citizens need to be provided care and financial support, since each of them has certain contributions to society. During their adulthood, they have dedicated all their time and effort to complete a number of tasks to help the public and the whole nation in general. As there will be a little amount of their salaries go into the national fund for the authorities to maintain and develop some community services such as building more hospitals, schools, etc. Furthermore, some people do not have a family, others may be war veterans and have trouble finding work due to physical or psychological impairments. Without the assistance of the government, they will probably have no place to live, no food to eat, and no medical check-up.
On the other hand, I believe that nations ought to encourage ownership of one’s own future since they have been taught to be independent while they were at school. Every individual in society also should save their own money to cover their non-essential expenses so it will not cause a huge financial burden on the state budget. This is due to the fact that how wealthy a country can be, it can hardly satisfy each of their people’s demands, consequently, they will face a lot of difficulties when they need to afford entertainment or new fashion items.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is necessary for the government to assist retirees with money and take care of them while each retiree needs to save certain amounts of money to stay financially independent.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, while, as to, in conclusion, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9358974359 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78290043758 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612179487179 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.849197984 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251524428661 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894630603288 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718556667434 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163437919207 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564848565333 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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