The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern and innovative world, where automation and new technologies are booming at a dramatic rate, it has become a challenge for the masses to resist themselves from the modern lifestyle which is affecting their health by posing a risk of getting overweight and many other related issues. Few people are of the view that expanding the school curriculum by introducing physical education can be a simple and effective solution to the emerging problem, while many others claim that a collaborative approach is needed to mitigate the increasing pressure on the healthcare system. I am in accord with the latter statement and think that a single institution alone cannot grapple the issue without the contribution from the related platforms.
School, where children spend their maximum time on a weekly basis, is considered as a second home for them. It is an undeniable fact that adding a compulsory physical class in a school will help children in acquiring healthy workout habits at an early ages, which will go a long way in their lives. For example, a well educated physically fit adult will pass on his/her learnings to their family and upcoming generations. Hence, having been trained at the school, the children can help in maintaining a healthy future lifestyle.
Although school is a healthy and reliable place for children, the efficacy of a family's role is indispensable. The first school of any child is its family, where one learns to acquire healthy living habits. Parents act as a role model for their children, following whom they learn to structure their daily routine. For instance, kids from a family, who follows a strict and healthy eating and workout regime will surely adapt to new physical learnings in school as well. So, in order to accelerate the agenda designed by one system, equal co-operation is needed from the other as well.
To conclude, the worry of any country related to health of its youth is on a surge. Nowadays, it is a point of moot that how can a school or other involved bodies be taken into consideration in order to gobble up this problem. In my opinion, simply putting a burden on one system can do nothing fruitful rather it should be a shared responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7759602943 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570666666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8974473957 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12827895945 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386279881919 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360240747455 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794897226996 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535192103159 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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