A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary society, there have been a spirited debate by people from all over the world that either people have to treat animals as they communicate each other and animals have a right like humans or mankind should exploit animals for research and food. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give my opinion by supporting examples, as well as there will be a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, it is undeniably true that people are responsible for animal endanger because of their interest and necessity situation. In additional, as we human increases, we are preparing more and more food resources in intend of food abundance. First of all, we have been killing considerable amount of creatures in order to live on and posing a treat for their population. For example, livestock, especially cattle are being used for trade from Mongolia to china. Secondly, there have been a wide range of people, who enjoy hunt in order to satisfy or reduce their stress. Because of such blood sport and human needs, animals are not be able to protect by those, who think animal’s interest.
On the other hand, each year, plenty of zoo found in some particular area, where animals can reside far more properly. Animals is loved by children and parents in that place and those people prove their safety. For example, my aunt work in zoo, which is located in central of Ulaanbaatar. So, she suggest that we have begun to love animals like a baby such as feeding, washing and treating compared with last decades. So, however some of the animals in severe situation, there would be always these people, who know how to treat animals appropriately.
In conclusion, this have been certain that animals are in the brink of die out. Personally, despite some of the such cruel interest and necessity, it is time to consider about animal’s right in realistic manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 641, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... sport and human needs, animals are not be able to protect by those, who think ani...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun zoo seems to be countable; consider using: 'plenty of zoos'.
Suggestion: plenty of zoos
...nterest. On the other hand, each year, plenty of zoo found in some particular area, where an...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...ated in central of Ulaanbaatar. So, she suggest that we have begun to love animals like...
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Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...compared with last decades. So, however some of the animals in severe situation, there woul...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e brink of die out. Personally, despite some of the such cruel interest and necessity, it i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.865625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61059851555 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1976302652 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346301103512 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105825633062 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869491412771 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207437158726 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815785463605 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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