A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It has been the norm that animals deserve the rights to be treated evenly and not to be excessively hunted for the sake of human race. By contrast, it is argued that animals exploitation is commonplace with a view to fulfilling the insatiable thirst of human beings. This essay will highlight the rationale of the two perspectives as well as my endorsement to the former one
As a matter of fact, those who advocate the latter viewpoint are under the impression that human race stands at the top of the food chain,thus being entitled to control the fate of any living creatures. By the same token, animals are universally regarded as having no specific emotion or conscious at all, which renders human justified in overly taking advantage of animals and correspondingly having no qualms about exploiting them to their hearts’ desire. Suffice it to say, either for food or for any scientific research, animals are invariably the optimal choices for human to employ as animals possess an array of incomparably pivotal values that there is nowhere to be found. A prime illusion for this is salmon, of which its oil can afford children with vitamin A in particular which is immensely beneficial for children’ eyes. To that end, it can be concluded that animals exploitation is all grist to the mill of human beings
With respect to the former perspective as well as my consent, there are a myriad of alternative sources that can substitute the role animals to wholly meet the very fundamental demand of human beings. Vegetation is a case in point that typifies another choice in lieu of animals, which is considered as exerting a desirable impact on human by virtue of the fact that it can mitigate against the escalation of obesity in today’s context , hence reducing the likelihood of the vast extinction of animals.In addition, researches also remain highly likely to be carried out successfully irrespective of the disappearance of animals. Inasmuch as the ever-growing development of technology, scientists can truly puzzle out the methods to conduct researches without experiments on animals.As a whole, these ideas majorly consolidate my belief that letting animals lead their peaceful lives is such a judicious choice
In conclusion, these two aforementioned viewpoints are all justifiable .However, the benefits of not intervening in animals lives make it hard for me to see animals exploitment as anything other than essential . Should human agree to give animals the right to live as equally as they deserve, it can be undeniably human who chiefly reap a huge advantage from it d
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...an race. By contrast, it is argued that animals exploitation is commonplace with a view...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
...race stands at the top of the food chain,thus being entitled to control the fate of a...
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Line 2, column 874, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
.... To that end, it can be concluded that animals exploitation is all grist to the mill o...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...tive as well as my consent, there are a myriad of alternative sources that can substit...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... alternative sources that can substitute the role animals to wholly meet the very...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...escalation of obesity in today’s context , hence reducing the likelihood of the va...
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Suggestion: In
...ihood of the vast extinction of animals.In addition, researches also remain highly...
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...ly likely to be carried out successfully irrespective of the disappearance of ani...
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Suggestion: As
...searches without experiments on animals.As a whole, these ideas majorly consolidat...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...mentioned viewpoints are all justifiable .However, the benefits of not intervening...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ntioned viewpoints are all justifiable .However, the benefits of not intervening in ani...
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Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oitment as anything other than essential . Should human agree to give animals the ...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...ee to give animals the right to live as equally as they deserve, it can be undeniably huma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as a matter of fact, as well as, with respect to, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06542056075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96717210992 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567757009346 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.229156198 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.8 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.2 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336277274108 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142130529126 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690201116615 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206144993258 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645085626881 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...an race. By contrast, it is argued that animals exploitation is commonplace with a view...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
...race stands at the top of the food chain,thus being entitled to control the fate of a...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 874, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
.... To that end, it can be concluded that animals exploitation is all grist to the mill o...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...tive as well as my consent, there are a myriad of alternative sources that can substit...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... alternative sources that can substitute the role animals to wholly meet the very...
^^
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...escalation of obesity in today’s context , hence reducing the likelihood of the va...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ihood of the vast extinction of animals.In addition, researches also remain highly...
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Line 3, column 584, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly likely to be carried out successfully irrespective of the disappearance of ani...
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Line 3, column 785, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...searches without experiments on animals.As a whole, these ideas majorly consolidat...
^^
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mentioned viewpoints are all justifiable .However, the benefits of not intervening...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ntioned viewpoints are all justifiable .However, the benefits of not intervening in ani...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oitment as anything other than essential . Should human agree to give animals the ...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...ee to give animals the right to live as equally as they deserve, it can be undeniably huma...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as a matter of fact, as well as, with respect to, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06542056075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96717210992 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567757009346 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.229156198 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.8 106.682146367 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.8 20.7667163134 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.2 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336277274108 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142130529126 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690201116615 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206144993258 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645085626881 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.