Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is regarded as truly significant day to day basis. While people have difficulties to defining happiness, several elements can be found to acquire happiness.
To begin with, there are some reasons why happiness is complicated to be explained with one word. First and foremost, the standard of happiness is differentiated by enormous amounts of peopleon Earth. For example, some would put more value into abstract things such as love, friendship, and family while others consider wealth and honor better as happiness. In addition, it is undoutedly true that happiness does not exist for a certain period. In other words, it can be a short moment in present as well as a goal in the future, which means not only untangible but also invisible.
Consequently, we can discover several elements to achieve happiness in our daily life. Firstly, not having exceedingly high standard from one's status is concerned. This is because, by being able to be satisfied with what they have, people can avoid complaining about their life and this, in turn, naturally leads them to reach happiness easily without disatisfaction feelings. Secondly, we must not compare ourselves with others. Considering the fact that all the population in the world has different personalities, financial capacity, values and situations, comparison will bring you an endless negative thoughts. Eventually, it can cause a depression and lowering self-esteem.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why happiness definition comes difficult to be described, and we could think that severe factors for happiness can be shown.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24302788845 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83365816172 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645418326693 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 251.0 20.2975951904 1237% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1316.0 106.682146367 1234% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 251.0 20.7667163134 1209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 171.0 7.06120827912 2422% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258590384302 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.258590384302 0.084324248473 307% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17120764899 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332135485395 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 128.8 13.0946893788 984% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -191.75 50.2224549098 -382% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 102.4 11.3001002004 906% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.18 8.58950901804 235% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 102.4 10.1190380762 1012% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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