has computer made life easier?
Nowadays, with the rapid development of the technology, it has become an important part of the human's life. Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient, but other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. I, on the other hand, think that computers have made life more simple and convenient because it helps people communicate, get information and do research.
Firstly, computers have made life easily done and more convenient is preferable, as a result, you can communicate with other people with no trouble, especially for many people who live far from their family. For example, my uncle has lived and worked in America for 15 years, but my grandmother and my family are living in Vietnam so that it is very difficult to contact without using computers. Furthermore, it is extremely helpful when you have to face up to an emergency situation. For instance, a few days ago, I need to bring my research for my literature class and I had left if at home. So I was totally worried because it is the deadline of the research. If I did not hand in the paper, I would have gotten a worse score. Then in this case, I had to call my father to bring it to me. Thus, it is highly convenient for many people.
Secondly, the computers provide many pieces of information, you can use the computer to get information and broaden your knowledge. You can read the news and listen to the radio on the computer. Thus, it can help you to update your information.
Finally, the computers are extremely useful when you need to do research. You can find the information on the internet then you can type your research on the computer. It can help you save the research easily. When you have done the research, you can print them out neatly. Therefore, you can do your works easily, no matter it what it is, even audio or video data.
In conclusion, I think that computers have made life easier and more beneficial for the reason as communication, information and research.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... it has become an important part of the humans life. Some people say that computers ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68169014085 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6921826924 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495774647887 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7224517764 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256201544615 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801704024381 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138438473088 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205180017417 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182522848388 0.056905535591 321% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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