Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health. However, people are walking less nowadays. Why is this happening? How can people be encouraged to walk more?
Undoubtedly, walking is a good form of exercise and is an effective method for improving and developing the health of all people. But, these days people walk less. This essay will discussed several reasons for such a situation and few ways to encourage people to walk more and more.
Discussing the reasons, the most obvious reason is that, availability of public and private transport vehicles. In this modern era, most of the citizens have their own personal vehicles so instead of walking they prefer to use those vehicle to save their valuable time so they spend more time in more important activities. Another reason is that, increase the street crime. For example, a worldwide survey show that 50% of total crime is street crimes like snatching and robbery and many more. Thatswhy people feel fear to walk on street. Moreover, sedentary lifestyle and technology affect the life of people. Todays, civilians have more effective way of transportation so they shun the walking.
There are several ways to encourage people to walk more and more. The first and foremost one is that, develop separate walking lane for pedestrians. For example, in developed nations, government developed separate walking lane along with road but in developing economy like India, China and other countries not have separate walking lane so government should develop walking lane for pedestrians. In addition, people are less aware about benefits of walking. So, government and some social group come out for this and organise some campaign of awareness of health benefits of walking. To add to this, government should use social media platforms like television, internet and social websites for awareness campaigns.
In conclusion, there are several reasons for people walk lesser today as compared to earlier time and some way of solutions are also there to encourage people for walking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20860927152 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6093576649 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526490066225 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.837228893 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5294117647 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368275261243 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133556214357 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107964091899 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266934842179 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116528427938 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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