Everything has two sides and homeschooling is not an exception. In the past, it
seemed like the most natural way of educating children, but today, many people
criticize it.
We must acknowledge that parents know their children best. That gives them a good
chance of knowing how to make their children understand certain concepts. Using
a child’s interest, parents can make the process of learning more enjoyable and
effective. In addition, being at home makes children feel safe which can greatly
contribute to their ability to concentrate on studying.
Nevertheless, many people believe that teaching should be done by professionals.
There are many proven scientific approaches that produce good and effective results
and without those techniques parents, who teach their children at home, have no
chance. Associative learning is a good example of such a technique. Showing the
child images while learning the alphabet for example ‘Apple’ for ‘A’ or ‘Boy’ for ‘B’
makes him or her remember the letters faster and more easily.
Furthermore, not every parent is capable of teaching his or her child at home, for the
blind cannot lead the blind. Parents cannot teach the children something which they
do not know themselves, and let’s face it – not all of us have profound knowledge of
history or geography even on a school textbook level. Eventually, even those moms
and dads who had succeeded at school could forget the materials they studied as
time went by.
In conclusion, I have more trust in the abilities and experiences of professional teachers
than I do on my own.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39615384615 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04497597663 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7625303461 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0452319307514 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.018961642329 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245332637044 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0126648213186 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220899372438 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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