Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measure can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both view and give your opinion
Hardly can anyone deny the increasing popularity of impacts of human activities on animals and plants. While many people argue that it is too late to do anything to tackle this issue, others reckon that a lot of efficient solutions can be taken to cope with the aforementioned issue. This essay will analyze both of views along with my own opinion.
On the one hand, there are a wide range of reasons why people think human cannot do anything else to solve the problem, one of which is that human beings cannot stop their activities. Indeed, manufactures operate on a daily basis and emit a lot of carbon dioxide, which increase the temperature of the globe. Consequently, climate change affects on plants, animal and humankind badly. The thing is human cannot stop these activities because people have to produce a number of products to meet the demand of human. In addition, the populations of countries on over the world keep increasing significantly. This will lead to the fact that more and more people use vehicle and travel on the streets, which emit more fumes into the air and cause pollution more. For instance, the increasing populations of some countries in Asia make environment worse. Therefore, most plants and animals cannot survival in extreme conditions such as air pollution, deforestation as well as flood and hurricanes.
On the other hand, I am convinced that it is not too late to do anything else to cope with the issue. There are a lot of solutions for the problem. Firstly, people can replace using fossil fuel by other alternative fuel including wind power, solar power and hydro power, which do not release carbon dioxide. For example, numerous scientist in developed countries has researched successfully in finding other sources to reduce emitting carbon dioxide. The other point which needs to be concerned is that governments can hold more campaigns to improve the awareness of citizens in protecting environment as well as any creatures on over the world. To be specific, governments can make documentary films about how damage people make with environment to improve their residents awareness of the issue.
In conclusion, although many people reckon that human beings cannot do anything to save plants and animal species, I have a strong belief that we can do plenty of actions to improve our environment and to save an eclectic mix of creatures due to aforementioned analysis.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02985074627 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77425533451 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512437810945 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9044094874 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309481318635 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842410270156 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631172644072 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197581647834 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570721270305 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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