The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

Essay topics:

The diagram shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

The diagram illustrates how electric power is produced by using geothermal energy.

As can be seen from the diagram, the process of generating electricity in a geothermal power plant includes five main steps from pumping cold water to underground to producing electric power.

To begin with, cold water on the surface of the earth is pumped down to the injection well which is at the depth of 4.5 km. At this point, water is heated by hot rocks in geothermal zone so that cold water becomes hot one and it will be contained in the production well. The next step is that hot water is pumped up to the surface of the globe and is ready for condensing.

The following step is that condensed water is changed to be stream which is the power activating a turbine. After that, this active turbine generates the power to start electric generator. As a result, electricity is formed and stored at a high tower in the geothermal power plant.

Votes
Average: 7.4 (12 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68674698795 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59257400604 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1843360034 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222694709274 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122527290591 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175410447924 0.0843802449381 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217227555375 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203252093707 0.0819641961636 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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