Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is perceived by many that living in a nation where you have to use a language which is not your mother tongue to communicate with local people can cause some serious social issues, along with practical troubles. Personally, I partly agree with the opinion.
Hardly can anyone deny that more and more people live in other countries for a lot of purposes such as working, studying and so on. Therefore, they need to use the second language to talk to citizens there. With regard to the positiveness of the issue, there are two main benefits which need to be concerned. The first one is that using the foreign language can help you improve your social relationship with local people. Indeed, it is easier for you to make friend with native speakers when you use their own language. As a result, they can share more information about their country or even about themselves with you. For example, an international student living in a European country can have more native friends there if she can speak English fluently and this is the best way for her to improve her knowledge about the nation. The other point needs to be considered is that speaking foreign language can bring more opportunities for you to find a job. It is obviously that employers tend to hire people who can speak their language because they want their employees understand their requirements. This will lead to the fact that people who can use native language will have more chances to get jobs, compared to the people who cannot speak the language.
Aside from aforementioned merits, using a language which is not your the first one can cause some problems. One of these issues is that you may make local people misunderstand if you use words incorrectly. Especially, if what you say relates to their culture, it can cause some serious issues in this context. Secondly, language sometimes becomes a big fence in your daily life. Indeed, even you can speak their language very well, there will be some cases which are out of your control. Let imagine that you talk to a taxi driver on phone to tell him where he can pick you up and then he drive to a wrong place because he is not familiar to your accent and misunderstands.
In conclusion, although communicating by using a foreign language when people live in another country can cause some serious problems, I have a belief that it can bring many benefits due to aforementioned analysis.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'drives'.
Suggestion: drives
...im where he can pick you up and then he drive to a wrong place because he is not fami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75534441805 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60206594358 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475059382423 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4806841051 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.368421053 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1578947368 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400812818542 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131572766112 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073341030338 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270019244177 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333128466514 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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